tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1756188169395753338.post4486496671898049017..comments2023-03-26T06:53:01.638-07:00Comments on Farmer Brains: bornUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1756188169395753338.post-53630038255672524902011-05-04T11:49:12.285-07:002011-05-04T11:49:12.285-07:00Well written. I am not sure I could have described...Well written. I am not sure I could have described it so well!NatureGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04783548641415184538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1756188169395753338.post-36946819336561604532011-05-04T07:36:55.055-07:002011-05-04T07:36:55.055-07:00WOW. You have EVERY reason to be proud. Way to go!...WOW. You have EVERY reason to be proud. Way to go! :)The Rebel Chickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01324457974119392834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1756188169395753338.post-11608259852581589252011-05-03T22:28:57.528-07:002011-05-03T22:28:57.528-07:00You absolutely capture labor. Loved this line...M...You absolutely capture labor. Loved this line...My eyes find their way back to the front of my head. Great way to describe regaining your equilibrium following a huge contraction!<br /><br />I actually winced when I read the 9.5#s!<br /><br />I felt the last two lines were a powerful and celebratory ending. Really enjoyed the piece.Mayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03485338098212307793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1756188169395753338.post-28453080638128064032011-05-03T20:17:29.803-07:002011-05-03T20:17:29.803-07:00NO DOUBT!!!!!! That was a visceral reading I must...NO DOUBT!!!!!! That was a visceral reading I must say, OY! I was right there with you , my eyes rolling in the back of my head...<br />My son was 9lbs. 2oz. as well :) with no anesthesia either.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04440694520775692850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1756188169395753338.post-73975634270304504292011-05-03T17:45:25.989-07:002011-05-03T17:45:25.989-07:00I am so glad that everything went well with your h...I am so glad that everything went well with your home birth! Pushing out a nine pound baby is an incredible feat of love.<br />I do have some concrit... "breathe" instead of "breath". Also "bear" instead of "bare". I'm not sure what you meant by "spare energy for gluttonous".<br />My favorite sentence is "The midwives were simple voices blurred in the background like the candle's soft haze breaking the darkness of my room." That is beautiful imagery!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com